Comments on: March 15, 2010 — David Means: “The Knocking”

By: Colette Jones

Colette Jones — Fri, 19 Mar 2010 09:05:56 +0000

This is about a man not coping, not coping at all, going mad in fact. He’s transferring his madness onto the resident of the apartment above, but we don’t believe him.

Good premise, but not good writing, in my opinion. Glad it was short.

By: KevinfromCanada

KevinfromCanada — Fri, 12 Mar 2010 21:47:54 +0000

My reading was probably colored by having read these comments first. I would characterize the story as an extended metaphor, not a particularly good or appropriate one. All in all, a rather lame effort.

By: Trevor

Trevor — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 15:51:48 +0000

I wondered about the poetry comparison too, Joe. But I thought against it when I realized that the comparison did no favors to poetry.

By: Joe

Joe — Tue, 09 Mar 2010 05:13:26 +0000

I found this one pretty unpleasant and was really put off by the Proustian excess. If your first sentence is going to clock in at 150 words, there’d better be a good reason for it.

I know the New Yorker likes to mix it up a bit — different styles, voices, etc. — but this just seemed show-offy. If anything, it’s more of a poem than a story. Well, I’m just glad it was short.

By: Trevor

Trevor — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 19:44:56 +0000

I’ve posted my meager thoughts above. Unfortunately, it isn’t because the story is short that my thoughts are meager.

By: Trevor

Trevor — Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:16:15 +0000

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