{"id":3255,"date":"2010-03-08T01:14:35","date_gmt":"2010-03-08T05:14:35","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/?p=3255"},"modified":"2016-06-08T18:12:35","modified_gmt":"2016-06-08T22:12:35","slug":"penelope-fitzgerald-offshore","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/2010\/03\/08\/penelope-fitzgerald-offshore\/","title":{"rendered":"Penelope Fitzgerald: <em>Offshore<\/em>"},"content":{"rendered":"<pre><span style=\"color: #003366;\"><em><strong>Offshore<\/strong><\/em><\/span>\r\n<span style=\"color: #808080;\">by Penelope Fitzgerald (1979)<\/span>\r\n<span style=\"color: #808080;\">Mariner Books (1998)<\/span>\r\n<span style=\"color: #808080;\">141 pp<\/span><\/pre>\n<p>I was wary of Penelope Fitzgerald. I don&#8217;t know why.\u00a0Perhaps it&#8217;s something about an author publishing her first four novels in four years. But to offset that,\u00a0this outburst of fiction\u00a0(<em>The Golden Child<\/em>, 1977; <em>The Bookshop<\/em>, 1978; <em>Offshore<\/em>, 1979; and <em>Human Voices<\/em>, 1980) began when she was sixty years old &#8212; and those were some exceedingly cultivated sixty years.\u00a0These books were well received, and she has the good opinion of many discriminating critics.\u00a0So what if\u00a0she published her first four novels in four years?\u00a0There is something miraculous in her literary career: in eighteen years toward the end of her life, she published nine books of fiction.\u00a0If this was a true artistic explosion and not just someone who tacked together a working formula, it couldn&#8217;t be missed.\u00a0I decided to start by reading <em>Offshore<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/Offshore.jpg\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" decoding=\"async\" data-attachment-id=\"3422\" data-permalink=\"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/2010\/03\/08\/penelope-fitzgerald-offshore\/offshore\/#main\" data-orig-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/Offshore.jpg?fit=356%2C530&amp;ssl=1\" data-orig-size=\"356,530\" data-comments-opened=\"1\" data-image-meta=\"{&quot;aperture&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;credit&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;camera&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;caption&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;created_timestamp&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;copyright&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;focal_length&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;iso&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;shutter_speed&quot;:&quot;0&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;&quot;}\" data-image-title=\"Offshore\" data-image-description=\"\" data-image-caption=\"\" data-large-file=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/Offshore.jpg?fit=356%2C530&amp;ssl=1\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-3422\" title=\"Offshore\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/Offshore.jpg?resize=356%2C530\" alt=\"\" width=\"356\" height=\"530\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/Offshore.jpg?resize=201%2C300&amp;ssl=1 201w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/Offshore.jpg?fit=356%2C530&amp;ssl=1 356w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 356px) 100vw, 356px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>I love how the book begins, such a sly attention grabber:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span style=\"color: #003366;\">&#8216;Are we to gather that <em>Dreadnought<\/em> is asking us all to do something dishonest?&#8217; Richard asked.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #003366;\"><em>Dreadnought<\/em> nodded, glad to have been understood so easily.<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>It turns out that <em>Dreadnought<\/em> is one of several houseboats in Battersea Reach on the Thames. Its owner is Willis, a sixty-five-year-old painter,\u00a0and he has plans to sell his boat and move to land where he can live with his widowed sister. However, the boat is old and not worth much &#8212; but, perhaps it could be worth a bit more . . .<\/p>\n<p>Richard, captain of the boat <em>Lord Jim<\/em>, is the de facto leader of the small community set in Battersea Reach. It probably goes without saying that Fitzgerald&#8217;s characters are people living on the fringe of society. Living neither on the land nor on the sea, these are characters who don&#8217;t fit\u00a0well in society. Besides <em>Dreadnought <\/em>and <em>Lord Jim<\/em> (and others), this community also includes <em>Maurice <\/em>and <em>Grace<\/em>.\u00a0Maurice lives on <em>Maurice<\/em>\u00a0(the boat used to be named <em>Dondeschipolschuygen IV<\/em>, but Maurice renamed it when he found out everyone referred to each other by their boat&#8217;s name).\u00a0Maurice&#8217;s male clients are there most of the night, but it&#8217;s the man who stores his merchandise on the boat that causes the most\u00a0fear. Nenna lives on <em>Grace<\/em> with her two young\u00a0daughters,\u00a0Tilda and Martha. When Nenna&#8217;s husband, Edward,\u00a0returned from South America a failure, his wife&#8217;s situation on the boat was still below him.<\/p>\n<p><em>Offshore<\/em> revolves around these strange, basically lonely characters. They frequently encounter each other, they are friendly, they do form part of a community, but the loneliness, the separateness remains. And that is all due to Fitzgerald&#8217;s wonderful prose. The following quote, for example, says so much about Nenna and her two daughters. On the surface, it sounds somewhat hopeful, as they like to see their situation. But there&#8217;s a desperation beyond the obvious. There&#8217;s an intimation into what\u00a0could happen when Martha and Tilda grow up a bit more.<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span style=\"color: #003366;\">Martha and Tilda were in the position of having no spending money, but this was less important when they were not attending school and were spared the pains of comparison, and they felt no bitterness against their mother, because she hadn&#8217;t any either. Nenna believed, however, that she would have some in the spring, when three things would happen, each, like some melting ice-floes, slowly moving the next one on. Edward would come and live on <em>Grace<\/em>, which would save the rent he was paying on his rooms at present; the girls, once they were not being prayed for at the grotto, would agree to go back to the nuns; and with Tilda at school she could go out herself and look for a job.<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Nenna is, in many ways, the central character. The other characters have their unique stories, but more time is spent on Nenna, which is proper. Not only is Nenna&#8217;s story intriguing but Fitzgerald has given her a fabulous interior dialogue:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><span style=\"color: #003366;\">. . . Nenna&#8217;s thoughts, whenever she was alone, took the form of a kind of perpetual magistrate&#8217;s hearing, in which her own version of her marriage was shown as ridiculously simple and demonstrably right, and then, almost exactly at the same time, as incontrovertibly wrong. Her conscience, too, held, quite uninvited, a separate watching brief, and intervened in the proceedings to read statements of an unwelcome nature.<\/span><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>For glorious pages Nenna is interrogated by this judge as her husband, the plaintiff, sits in the background.\u00a0Though this goes on for pages, Fitzgerald doesn&#8217;t overdo it. This technique doesn&#8217;t take over Nenna&#8217;s personality, and it still allows Nenna&#8217;s sad story to be told.<\/p>\n<p>Though short, this book actually took me quite a bit of time to read. The story\u00a0and\u00a0the characters are complex. Though Fitzgerald&#8217;s sentences\u00a0hold this complexity well, they are intricate and complex in and of themselves and take some time to digest. The book demanded time. But it was time so well spent. I loved this book.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Trevor reviews Penelope Fitzgerald&#8217;s <em>Offshore<\/em>. <a href=\"http:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/2010\/03\/08\/penelope-fitzgerald-offshore\/\"><u>Read the full post<\/u><\/a>.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":3422,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"libsyn-item-id":0,"libsyn-show-id":0,"libsyn-post-error":"","libsyn-post-error_post-type":"","libsyn-post-error_post-permissions":"","libsyn-post-error_api":"","playlist-podcast-url":"","libsyn-episode-thumbnail":"","libsyn-episode-widescreen_image":"","libsyn-episode-blog_image":"","libsyn-episode-background_image":"","libsyn-post-episode-category-selection":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_use_thumbnail":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_use_theme":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_height":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_width":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_placement":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_use_download_link":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_use_download_link_text":"","libsyn-post-episode-player_custom_color":"","libsyn-post-episode-itunes-explicit":"","libsyn-post-episode":"","libsyn-post-episode-update-id3":"","libsyn-post-episode-release-date":"","libsyn-post-episode-simple-download":"","libsyn-release-date":"","libsyn-post-update-release-date":"","libsyn-is_draft":"","libsyn-new-media-media":"","libsyn-post-episode-subtitle":"","libsyn-new-media-image":"","libsyn-post-episode-keywords":"","libsyn-post-itunes":"","libsyn-post-episode-itunes-episode-number":"","libsyn-post-episode-itunes-season-number":"","libsyn-post-episode-itunes-episode-type":"","libsyn-post-episode-itunes-episode-title":"","libsyn-post-episode-itunes-episode-author":"","libsyn-destination-releases":"","libsyn-post-episode-advanced-destination-form-data":"","libsyn-post-episode-advanced-destination-form-data-enabled":"","libsyn-post-episode-advanced-destination-form-data-input-enabled":false,"libsyn-post-episode-premium_state":"","libsyn-episode-shortcode":"","libsyn-episode-embedurl":"","_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[170],"tags":[882,904,1011,551,883],"coauthors":[505],"class_list":["post-3255","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-penelope-fitzgerald","tag-1970s","tag-904","tag-1979-booker-prize","tag-booker-prize","tag-booker-prize-winner"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/03\/Offshore.jpg?fit=356%2C530&ssl=1","jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/pqqvZ-Qv","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":false,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3255","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3255"}],"version-history":[{"count":11,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3255\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":18505,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3255\/revisions\/18505"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/3422"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3255"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3255"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3255"},{"taxonomy":"author","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/mookseandgripes.com\/reviews\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/coauthors?post=3255"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}