“The Flats Road”
by Alice Munro
from Lives of Girls and Women


Since the last time we wrote about Alice Munro, I’ve seen quite a backlash. Christian Lorentzen seemed to break a dam when he published “Poor Rose,” a takedown of Munro’s entire oeuvre, in the London Review of Books (here). After that, I read hundreds of tweets from people saying they agreed with Lorentzen, Munro is boring, it’s all the same. I just can’t help but think these people have never really given Munro a chance. Lorentzen did, of course — he read almost all of her books — but he apparently read them all over the course of a few weeks, and it seems clear that when he did so he left all good will aside from the beginning.

Oh well. For me, it’s a wonderful thing to go back to Munro’s world, and “The Flats Road” does just that.

The world of “The Flats Road” is a world we are familiar with. It’s the world of Del Jordan, a protagonist in a few of Munro’s first short stories, who lives just on the outskirts of Jubilee with her family: her father, who raises silver foxes, a business with “some glamorous and ghostly, never realized, hope of fortune”; her mother, who is ashamed of their situation in life and corrects Del whenever Del says they live on the Flats Road — “she said we lived at the end of the Flats Road; and her little brother Owen, who hasn’t quite become aware of the larger world. Then again, Del herself is still in the early stages of awareness, and this story is, in large part, about her first experiences understanding danger and isolation, even at her home.

The Flats Road is neither in the town nor in the country. It’s a kind of limbo between established zones and the established lives found there.

Houses here were set further apart and looked in general more neglected, poor, and eccentric than town houses would ever be; half a wall would be painted and the job abandoned, the ladder left up; scars of a porch torn away were left uncovered, and a front door without steps, three feet off the ground; windows could be spread with yellowed newspapers in place of blinds.

People who live on the Flats Road tend to find themselves there because they belong no where else. One of the eccentrics is the man the Jordan family calls Uncle Benny, though he is no one’s uncle. He spends a lot of time fishing, and Del and Owen like to catch frogs for his bait. He’s a strange person, and the reader is justified, I think, in being concerned for Del and Owen. Uncle Benny is harmless, sure, but he seems he could quickly veer and become a source of danger.

The whole of the Flats Road seems it is just about dangerous. At the same time, the perception of danger is a new one for Del, and what she’s beginning to contemplate as dangerous are really just the eccentricities of people she’s discovering are different. At any rate, any sense of danger — mixed still with excitement (Del loves to read Uncle Benny’s lurid tabloids) — dissipates when Del gets to her house.

Why was it that the plain back wall of home, the pale chipped brick, the cement platform outside the kitchen door, washtubs hanging on nails, the pump, the lilac bush with brown-spotted leaves, should make it seem doubtful that a woman would really send her husband’s torso, wrapped in Christmas paper, by mail to his girlfriend in South Carolina?

Introduced early on, also, is the theme of story-telling. A man on the Flats Road married a widow, and the ghost of her dead husband haunted them, finally driving them to leave. But the ghost followed. The man returned to the Flats Road without his new wife. It’s a story, and the characters rightly doubt its veracity. But what was the underlying purpose of the story? Was it just for fun? Or was it something even more sinister?

These themes come together when Uncle Benny responds to a personal ad:

Lady with one child desires housekeeping position for man in quiet country home. Fond of farm life. Matrimony if suited.

The latter part of the story deals with the terrible situation in which Uncle Benny finds himself, a situation with genuine danger that inspires the characters to momentary energy to do something to correct a wrong. Of course, as these things often go, it’s easier to sit back. As time passes, the mind normalizes and fictionalizes the past. We cannot be sure the danger was real, and that’s a great comfort.

But one cannot not so easily wash away all of the effects. Some doubt remains, some sense that the danger was real and goes on. The world is truly not safe, and, sadly, for Del this new awareness penetrates her own home. She lies in bed one night while her parents play cards downstairs in the kitchen:

And upstairs seemed miles above them, dark and full of the noise of the wind. Up there you discovered what you never remembered down in the kitchen — that we were in a house as small and shut up as any boat is on the sea, in the middle of a tide of howling weather.


In “The Flats Road,” Del looks back to a period of almost a year in her childhood; she is about nine, the war has already started, and a story unfolds that revolves around the colorful hired man, Uncle Benny. At the same time, though, the story seems to be about story-telling, especially how to tell if a story’s true, and maybe how to tell if what you hear is true or evil or merely entertaining.

The story is so alive, strange, complex, and rich that it is difficult to reduce to a take: say one thing, and you’ve left some other thing aside. Munro mixes complexity into almost every paragraph. But — no way in but in.

The Flats Road, where Del’s father has his nine-acre fox farm, is a tumbledown and shabby neighborhood, the kind of place where a house might have “a front door without steps, three feet off the ground, windows could be spread with yellowed newspapers in place of blinds.”

There appear to be no children to play with, and so this particular summer Del and her brother Owen hang around with Uncle Benny, who lives in a wreck of a house next door that is gladdened by no end of coons and squirrels that he feeds, and a few wild animals that he keeps in cages — a ferret, a few minks, and a red fox. Uncle Benny likes to fish, and the kids like to kill frogs for him to use as bait. They get a charge out of his house, where there is no end of junk hoarded helter-skelter, and they get a charge out of Uncle Benny himself, who has vivid stories. He tells them not to go into the swamp, because “there was a quicksand hole in there that would take down a two-ton truck like a bite of breakfast.”

Del remarks in an aside: “(In my mind I saw [the quicksand] shining, with a dry-liquid roll — I had it mixed up with quicksilver.)” In fact, what Del is suggesting is that life is like quicksilver, first one thing, then another, and hard to read.

The story concerns itself with danger, and whether or not you can tell what’s dangerous, and whether or not you can sense what evil is. The story is set against the time period when World War II has just begun. Del is only nine, so that is the only mention of the war, but it seems important, given that some of the English and also the Americans took their time understanding whether Hitler was actually evil or not.

Del looks forward to the tabloids that Benny gets, something she knows better than to talk about at home. After greedily reading as much as she could, she’d feel “bloated and giddy with revelations of evil, of its versatility and grand invention and horrific playfulness.” This is not the only time she mentions evil.

There’s a house on the Flats Road where an old bootlegger lives with his wife, a woman who used be a whore for the madam on the Flats Road, a fact Del did not know until later, but a fact which might have bearing on the way the woman could be seen “wandering out to the mailbox, any hour of the day, in a tattered housecoat barefoot.” Del remarks, “Their whole house seemed to embody so much that was evil and mysterious that I would never look at it directly, and walked by with my face set stiffly ahead, controlling my urge to run.” Later in the story, the reader has to wonder if looking directly at evil is as difficult as looking directly at the sun, but regardless, you know it by the feel.

As it happens, Uncle Benny gets it in his head to take a combination mail-order wife-housekeeper, but when she arrives, it appears she is hardly seventeen, the mother of a toddler, and as Del’s mother senses, “mentally deranged.” The girl, whose name is Madeleine, seems, in fact, crazy. Once, when Del is at Benny’s house, the girl picks up a cast iron pot lid, and Del knows it when she sees it: the girl would as soon hit her with it as not, depending on nothing more than a whim. Del doesn’t call her evil, but she knows she’s dangerous, and Del high-tails it out of there.

The story hinges on the moment when the girl disappears with the toddler and some of Benny’s things. Benny, it turns out, has become attached to the little girl. It dawns on Del’s mother that Madeleine has been beating the little girl, probably for no reason at all. It dawns on the reader that Benny knows this, but has fallen in love with the little girl, and doesn’t want to lose her. He chuckles as Del’s mother guesses at the reason for the toddler’s bruises. It is his nervous chuckling that gives away what he has been hiding.

Del’s mother wants to call the police; her father is realistic and cautions her about interfering. So, for a while nothing is done.

Then, suddenly, a letter arrives from the girl, demanding that Benny return a few of her things. Benny tells Del’s parents stories about the sadistic manner in which the young woman tortured the child. Benny sets off in Del’s father’s truck, and everyone expects him to return with the little girl. The city overwhelms him, however, and he returns defeated.

Del hears no one else offer to rescue the child. When she later talks about the deep quiet connection between her parents that is her buffer against the world, the reader has to know that they have discussed the baby, and decided they can do nothing. And that is how families deal, how they survive. They don’t take on so much that their own family topples as well. Being a saint is as hard as being an artist, and Munro well knows the price you can pay for being an artist. It’s not a hard leap to guess at the price for being a saint.

Later, Del says, when they talk about Madeleine, their stories make them laugh, echoing the way Benny chuckled when Del’s mother realized the little girl had been beaten.

This is a complicated story about evil, sensing the truth, and telling stories about it. Although Del remembers feeling safe in her snug little family, this is also the father that didn’t go with Benny to Toronto to rescue the little girl; this is also the mother who would later laugh about the young mother who was evil.

Munro has had Del be a little funny about how she told the story, and now the reader is also complicit, as if evil is something none of us can bear to see, like Del looking at the bootlegger’s house, as if evil is something we are always tempted to make into an entertainment. Even when we see it, sometimes we don’t.

“The Flats Road” is entertaining. It has, once again, our appealing, independent, androgynous girl; it has the family before the fall that adolescence ensures; it has the animals and the river; it has a scary house down the way, the one we all remember from childhood; and it has colorful Uncle Benny to be a guide to the underworld even children know exists.

One of the truths of childhood is the way children sniff danger, the way they process evil. On the one hand, there is Madeleine, a deranged Hitler-mother. On the other, though, we have Benny, who is incapable of redressing evil. Then we have Del’s family and ourselves (quite like them), who know evil when we see it, but let ourselves be persuaded to not get involved. We tell ourselves, maybe it’s only a story Benny told, and you know Benny. Maybe what we thought we understood is not really true. And anyway, what we sense maybe impossible to act upon.

At the same time, Munro is suggesting that the art of story-telling also has within it the risk of evil: that the story you tell may not be true. As a guard against that evil, of not seeing the world true, so she labors to create a whole world in one story, detailed, layered (her word), alive, and resonant. And so you have a place where Benny loves a small child, and is the only love she knows, but cannot save her.

In the epilogue to Lives of Girls and Women, Del writes that she wanted her writing to be:

. . . every last thing, every layer of speech and thought, stroke of light on bark or walls, every smell, pothole, pain, crack, delusion, held still and held together — radiant, everlasting.

And so, this story also has in it, along with all its delusions and hard truths, Del’s radiant hymn to her parents — that memory of a moment — of being tucked in upstairs, of feeling safe within her parents’ connection, the way the little family was a snug boat upon a sea.

And we all remember that brief time as well, and treasure it, moments before the child breaks upon the shoals of adolescence, or some other rock or hard truth.

To get us to read the story, Munro makes mystery; to achieve her layers, there are hints; to persuade us of its life, there are Hopper-like portraits of people and things; and there is mythmaking, as with the swamp and Uncle Benny; and to get every last thing . . . held still and held together, there is art.

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By |2017-08-03T22:53:39+00:00September 18th, 2013|Categories: Alice Munro|Tags: |11 Comments


  1. Lee Monks September 18, 2013 at 2:45 pm

    You can tool yourself up to take an author down, but how truly boring to do that out of contrary iconoclasm. I’ve read, just this year, demolition jobs on Proust, Joyce, Bolano and now Munro (had no idea about the latter being comprehensively hatcheted). No author should necessarily be beyond reproach but I cannot take any of it seriously. I’m no fan of any number of lionised writers but I accept that’s ultimately a matter of taste: I recognise any author’s susceptibility to a mauling, angle dependent. It’s games and posturing: done out of mischief, only with much less edifying results.

    And I expect to see a lot more of it now they’ve opened the Booker up to the US!

  2. KevinfromCanada September 18, 2013 at 10:02 pm

    Well, we do have to acknowledge that Alice does revisit her stories. I know we saw the fox farm in The View from Castle Rock and I am pretty sure it also showed up in one of the Dear Life stories. That’s just off the top of my head — and in general I think she has every right to look again at a particular set of circumstances.

    I also can never forget a Shadow Giller juror (pre-Trevor by some years it must be said) who said of Munro: “I just can’t take another story looking at the world through sepia-toned glasses.” She had a point, I must admit. I am sure if I sat down to reread her works, without a break, I would find them a tiresome challenge sometime in book three or four. On the other hand, if you allow some breathing time, she is a master.

  3. Trevor September 19, 2013 at 9:17 pm

    Thanks Lee and Kevin. Yes, Lee, I’ve been quiet here about my disappointment in the Man Booker for its silly games, but . . . well, but indeed.

    Kevin, I hopefully won’t ever know if your thesis applies to me. I plan to go through these steadily but slowly. As it is, it’s always a wonderful thing to come to her work.

    I also wanted to remark on how differently Betsy and I read that final passage where Del is up in her bedroom :-) . I think where I took it as a hollow ship, threatening to crack at any moment, I think Betsy took it as a protective womb. I can’t say either of us is right or wrong.

  4. Dwayne September 22, 2013 at 11:58 am

    With short stories I try to look for those moments of heightened conflict. Not so much fighting and arguing. With Munro the true conflict is always bubbling under the surface. And what I mean by conflict is the central conflict of the story. In “Flat Roads,” that central conflict seems to be Uncle Benny’s obstacles to finding love, and how he was so desperate for it he was willing to overlook the physical abuse to a child under his own roof.

    I felt this particular conflict bubble to the surface in the following 4 stages: (1) Toward the beginning of the story Uncle Benny has that conversation about getting a woman [it’s eluded to that it’s something he needs to get his life together]; (2) when he gets his mail-order-housekeeper-bride he hides her, knowing she’s deranged; (3) Madeline runs off, and Uncle Benny, desperate, runs after her; and (4) [this is the trickiest one] Did Uncle Benny not find Madeline on purpose? While he couldn’t write, he could read. He was clever. He got a child to write his proposal letter. And now he can’t figure out how find where this woman lives, even though he has the address? Please! Bull! Subconsciously, he saw this as his way out, and by claiming he couldn’t find Madeline, he didn’t have to feel guilty about wanting out of the relationship.

    Each conflict numbered above, systematically, not so much moves the story forward, but deepens the moral conflict. And examines it over and over again.

    So, my conclusion is that this story might be analyzing what some people are willing to overlook so that they don’t have to be alone. Uncle Benny tried and failed. And Del Jordan was there for most of the ride. Her first introduction to how ugly love can be. Knowing Munro, this is probably a primer for what’s to come. But, at the same time, I can understand how someone could see “evil” in this story. There were some strikingly scary moments toward the beginning.

  5. Betsy September 22, 2013 at 3:46 pm

    Nice observations, Dwayne. I found them quite helpful, sharp. I note particularly what Munro emphasizes, that Benny can read, but “chooses” to get lost.

    I defend, though, my (admittedly dangerous!) use of the word evil. Munro has Del use it in reference to the tabloids – that the evil in them makes her “bloated and giddy”. I think Del is working on the word – sorting out what evil is. Is it the tabloids? The madwoman? Her parents choosing not to rescue the child? Benny’s shenanigans? I suggest, still, it’s her parents choosing not to interfere. But clearly, Munro means evil to be “like quicksilver”. One thing from one angle and another from another.

    I really enjoyed your “4 stages of development”.

  6. Dwayne September 22, 2013 at 4:05 pm

    Cool … look forward to the next chapter.

  7. Trevor September 23, 2013 at 12:51 pm

    Thanks for your thougts, Dwayne. I love it when these conversations Betsy and I have grow with other’s contributions. I especially appreciate that you look much more closely at Uncle Benny than I did.

    I agree that the story is looking at what people are willing to overlook — or, as I think I put it and as I think the theme will be handled throughout Munro’s work, what stories people are willing to tell themselves — to deal with the harsh realities around them, not just so they won’t have to be alone. After all, it’s not just Uncle Benny trying to cope here, it’s also Del’s parents who are trying to push guilt under the rug, and it’s also Del herself who, now that she’s older, is trying to make sense of her youth.

  8. dwayne September 23, 2013 at 1:22 pm

    You bet … Trevor.

    Alice Munro’s work seems to welcome and endure this sort of scrutiny.

    I’m going to be relying on you and Betsy’s expertise as we move forward.

    Already the second chapter is increasingly more complex. I’m seeing the word “history” and “histories” mentioned several times in the first few pages. Already, Munro is dropping he clues for her readers.

    The first section of “Heirs of the Living Body,” has a lot of backstory. I hate to complain about that because you want to give an artist the room he/she needs create. But it has a lulling quality, and I had to fight to make my way throughout it. At least her line-for-line never feels like filler. Every word always seems necessary. So that’s a plus.

    Look forward to your reviews.

  9. dwayne September 23, 2013 at 1:24 pm

    I meant to write “line-for-line PROSE” … that it never feels like filler. Please excuse typos.

  10. Trevor September 23, 2013 at 3:46 pm

    All typos excused on my end. I know people have to endure mine here!

  11. Betsy September 24, 2013 at 11:04 pm

    Hi Trevor, just want to comment on the “backlash” from some people regarding Alice Munro’s work. Whitman’s great, but he’s not for everyone. Melville’s great, but he’s not for everyone. James is great, but he’s really not for everyone. (Add Joyce, Sebald, Coetzee, Bollano.) And then there’s the fact that reading all of an author too fast can be too much of a muchness.

    So I hope we take our time with Munro and read a lot of other things at the same time. .

    For some of us, what matters about Munro is how she loves life but refuses to pretty it up, how she loves women, but does not require them to be perfect; how she wants to “see” life – regardless of how painful it might be. In all that, she’s an heiress of Henry James, and that’s my cup of tea.

    I also like it that she says she sometimes takes several months with a story. That would explain why it takes more than one reading to take in one of her stories.

    We all have authors we don’t like. I love the idea of Elmore Leonard. I just can’t read him. I treasure the fact of George Eliot. I just can’t read her. I think for any reader, the DNR list is long. Why do I love Dostoevsky and why does Tolstoy baffle me? Well, that’s a rhetorical question. I don’t really want to answer that.

    So it seems ordinary that Lorentzen doesn’t like Munro. I wonder what he does like. When I finish Munro I’ll look into that.

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