Ottessa Moshfegh's "The Beach Boy" was originally published in the January 4, 2016 issue of The New Yorker. Click here to read the story in its entirety on The New Yorker webpage.

January 4, 2016Welcome to a new year of New Yorker fiction! I want to take a brief moment to thank you who come and add to the discussion here. Sometimes it is a big discussion. Sometimes it is small. Sometimes we applaud the magazine and sometimes we wonder why we bother. But this community is valuable and meaningful, so thank you, and I hope 2016 is a strong year! It’s starting out with a young writer . . .

Indeed, this is Ottessa Moshfegh’s first piece to be published in The New Yorker, though some of her work has already appeared in The Paris Review (six times!) and Granta, and her debut novel, Eileen, came out to positive buzz toward the end of this past summer. I myself am completely unfamiliar with her writing.

I look forward to your thoughts below!

Here are Adrienne’s initial thoughts to get us started:

A couple, steeped in privilege and an elite lifestyle, meet with an untimely death and grief upon returning home from a vacation on an island. The story is meant to explore a man’s experience with a controlling marriage, too-tightly fit career, and the lack of choice and freedom he feels inside his life of privilege and ease.

There were great images in this piece. They juxtaposed each other in a subtle, and quietly jarring way, yet they felt forced. This piece could have been an organic exploration of relationships, emotions, desires. Instead of allowing the reader to watch the story unfold in a natural and life-like flow, Moshfegh tells us what to see and think, and when, in an overt mannerThe characters are well-developed, but they are pushed from scene to scene, moment to moment, by the author. I wonder what John would have thought about the last picture on the roll if particular thoughts were not insisted upon him . . .

I tried to find the criteria used to select fiction for the magazine. I found this response from Deborah Treisman at The New Yorker: “We have no concept of “trademark” New Yorker fiction. It is next to impossible to define one limited category that would contain work by Haruki Murakami and Alice Munro, Edwidge Danticat and Jonathan Franzen, Jhumpa Lahiri and David Foster Wallace, William Trevor and Aleksandar Hemon, John Updike and Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie, Gabriel García Marquez and Antonya Nelson, to name just a few of the very different writers we’ve published in recent years. What is important for us is that a story succeed on its own terms. If the writer’s goal is to be linguistically inventive, he or she needs to pull that off and do something fresh; if his or her goal is to have an emotional impact, that must come through in some powerful way. The styles and approaches can be as different as is humanly possible, as long as they’re effective.”

“The Beach Boy” feels like it is on its way to “suceed[ing] on its own terms” but is not quite there yet. Such dramatic and sudden shifts in personality do take place in times of grief, in times of great upheaval, and sudden freedom. This transformation is covered in a brief paragraph, but it reads like it’s trying to create effect — make readers see the change — rather than allowing them to discover it on their own, notice it by connecting to their own life experiences while reading. The narrator feels as controlling as Marcia, without being as light-handed and airy.

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